Date: 30.9.2013
From the revised DoW (26.6.2012), the description of D5.1.3 is: „ Final repository of illustrations and technical report concerning the state of the art of illustrations for the
TERENCE learners; M36; Other; MOME: The deliverable will contain the final illustrations (for stories, games and their related items), for the stories and games of deliverables D2.2.3 and D4.3.3, and a short technical report on the state of the art and design of illustrations according to the requirements of D2.1.3.”
This online deliverable is meant to provide the material for fulfillment of the final repository task. The short technical report can be found in a separate document as D5.1.3.b, also available online here.
On 2.September 2013 WP5 received a requirement list (english version report 1-2-3 , english version report 4 , english version report 5)of smart game illustrations by e-mail from Piepaolo Vittorini (WP7). This list enumerated images with some problems: mismatching content, or the illustration was missing. As this list was generated by using the internal reference names of the TERENCE software, and used different identifiers than in D5.1.2 according to the specification for Release 2, the first task was to identify which images were involved. This was done based on the visual summary provided by WP7. Then the illustrators who originally prepared the images made the corrections. In this way the integrity of style was preserved.
As in the requirement list some identical images were mentioned under different identifiers (for English and Italian version of the same story, or in several occasions of games for the same book), finally WP5 had to revise 62 images.
As only a small number of images had to be revised of the total 1287 images for the Release 2 version of the smart games, and no other material was asked to be altered, we in this Deliverable we give only the revised / added images, the rest can be found in Deliverable 5.1.2 This solution was also necessary as in this round, for the revised images the different naming system did not make it possible to integrate the new images to the system used in D 5.1.2.
In the table below, we list all the revised images, in .ai and .pdf format. For identifying them, the following file naming convention is used:
- file names starting with GAM (in capital) indicate new illustrations. The file name is the one given in the requirement list.
- other file names are the file names used in D5.1.2, but extended with _v2, to indicate that this is the 2nd version of the images.
In the first column, we use the reference for the book and story as given in the requirement list. As the numbering of books and stories differ from the one used in Release2, for orientation we give in brackets the old book-story reference used in D5.1.2. Where this cell is empty, the content in the above cell applies.
In the second column, the requirement (reported problem) is listed. If in a cell 2 or 3 items are given, then they all refer to the same image.
Book-story-version, as given in the req. list |
Problem, as given in the requirement list |
ADOBE ILLUSTRATOR FILE |
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BOOK 1;2 (book 1) | |||
STO1-STV1 ; STO6-STV21 (story 1) | GAM-272 the graphics FIXED EVENT suggests the answer GAM-9 the illustration of the FIXED EVENT suggests the answer |
gam-32--q6_v2 | gam-32--q6_v2 |
STO2-STV5 ; STO7-STV-25 (story 2) | GAM-323 FIXED EVENT square instead of round GAM-71 FIXED EVENT square instead of round |
e43_v2 | e43_v2 |
GAM-72 CHO-219 the picture is not consistent with the caption “Little Hugh decided to visit the Fashion House” GAM-73 FIXED EVENT |
c_e15_v2 | c_e15_v2 | |
STO3-STV9 ; STO8-STV29 (story 3) | GAM-373 the illustration of the FIXED EVENT suggests the answer GAM-120 FIXED EVENT illustration suggests the answer |
q37_v2 | q37_v2 |
GAM-375 FIXED EVENT square instead of round GAM-122 FIXED EVENT |
GAM-375 fixed event_v2 | GAM-375 fixed event_v2 | |
GAM-376 FIXED EVENT square instead of round GAM-123 FIXED EVENT |
GAM-376 fixed event_v2 | GAM-376 fixed event_v2 | |
GAM-115 CHO-353 the caption talks about Annie, the Ugolino’s dog, but the illustration showing a little girl e37_w3 | e37_w3_v2 | e37_w3_v2 | |
GAM-116 CHO-355 the caption talking about Annie, but the illustration shows David | e35_w2_v2 | e35_w2_v2 | |
GAM-117 CHO-360 the caption talking about Annie, but the illustration shows David | e45_w4_v2 | e45_w4_v2 | |
GAM-119 FIXED EVENT illustration is not consistent with the caption “Little Hugh realized he was transparent” | e37_w2_v2 | e37_w2_v2 | |
GAM-120 CHO-368 the illustration does not show the character “Little Hugh” but the bottle | gam-2179--64_v2 | gam-2179--64_v2 | |
GAM-121 CHO-372 the caption talking about Annie, but the illustration shows David | e21_v2 | e21_v2 | |
GAM-123 CHO-377 the captions talking about Annie, but the illustrations show David GAM-123 CHO-378 the captions talking about Annie, but the illustrations show David GAM-124 CHO-381 the caption talking about Annie, but the illustration shows David |
GAM-123 CHO-377_v2 | GAM-123 CHO-377_v2 | |
STO4-STV13 ; STO9-VTS33 (stoy 4) | GAM-421 CHO-1300 the illustration is not clearly visible and centered GAM-165 CHO-508 the illustration is not clearly visible and centered |
e31_w3_v2 | e31_w3_v2 |
GAM-427 FIXED EVENT square instead of round | book1-story4.version.new.C4--c_e22_v2 | book1-story4.version.new.C4--c_e22_v2 | |
GAM-422 FIXED EVENT the picture does not match the caption, talks about the sweet Fork and shows another sweet GAM-166 FIXED EVENT the picture does not match the caption, talks about the sweet Fork and shows another sweet |
e22_v2 | e22_v2 | |
BOOK 3;4 (book2) | |||
STO11-STV41 ; STO16-STV61 (story 1) | GAM-525 CHO-1621 the picture does not match the caption “the people were very surprised” | e54_v2 | e54_v2 |
GAM-526 FIXED EVENT illustration suggests the answer GAM-771 FIXED EVENT |
q61_v2 | q61_v2 | |
GAM-528 FIXED EVENT "... takes pickaxe, rope and hooks," but the illustration also shows paint and brushes that are at a later stage of history GAM-529 FIXED EVENT GAM-773 FIXED EVENT |
e8_v2 | e8_v2 | |
GAM-528 CHO-1633 does not correspond to the picture caption, speaks of Ernestine and shows Mary | GAM-528 Cho-1633_v2 | GAM-528 Cho-1633_v2 | |
GAM-530 CHO-1638 the pictures does not match the captions “Mary decided to visit the village" | GAM-530 Cho-1638_v2 | GAM-530 Cho-1638_v2 | |
GAM-530 Cho-1639 the pictures does not match the captions “The painter saw the small village” | GAM-530 Cho-1639_v2 | GAM-530 Cho-1639_v2 | |
GAM-769 CHO-2382 Mario appoint an electrician, but the electrician is Luigi, in addition, the illustration shows Mario Luigi not. | e45_w2_v2 | e45_w2_v2 | |
STO13-STV49 ; STO18-STV69 (story 3) | GAM-621 CHO-1923 the caption talks about Ernestine, but the picture shows another character | e13_v2 | e13_v2 |
GAM-627 FIXED EVENT illustration suggests the answer “"Who thinks the stars?" GAM-878 FIXED EVENT |
q61_v2 | q61_v2 | |
GAM-629 il FIXED EVENT the eyes of the character in the illustration are not well designed | book2-story3-version1-new-c29--c_e28_v2 | book2-story3-version1-new-c29--c_e28_v2 | |
STO14-STV53 ; STO19-STV73 (story 4) | GAM-661 FIXED EVENT the illustration is not correct go put the black dog with white spots GAM-662 CHO-2049 GAM-663 FIXED EVENT GAM-663 CHO-2051 GAM-663 CHO-2053 |
e30_v2 | e30_v2 |
GAM-662 CHO-2048 the picture does not match the caption “Ernestine watched the roof” GAM-923 CHO-2859 |
e1_w1_v2 | e1_w1_v2 | |
GAM-664 CHO-2056 the picture does not match the caption “Spotty did not liked Ernestine’s hand” | e40_w2_v2 | e40_w2_v2 | |
GAM-668 CHO-2070 the picture does not match the caption “Ernestine and Spotty” | 41_w1_v2 | 41_w1_v2 | |
GAM-670 CHO-2075 the picture does not match the caption “There was stardust around the planet” GAM-930 CHO-2883 |
e11_v2 | e11_v2 | |
GAM-672 CHO-2080 the eyes of the character in the illustration are not well designed | GAM-672 cho-2080_v2 | GAM-672 cho-2080_v2 | |
STO15-STV57 ; STO20-STV77 (story 5) | GAM-713 CHO-2209 the picture does not match the caption, speaks of a coat and shows a hat GAM-714 CHO-2212 GAM-973 CHO-3017 GAM-974 CHO-3020 |
e4_w1_v2 | e4_w1_v2 |
GAM-716 CHO-2218 the picture does not match the caption, speaks of binoculars and shows windscope GAM-976 CHO-3026 |
e33_w1_v2 | e33_w1_v2 | |
GAM-718 FIXED EVENT illustration suggests the answer GAM-978 FIXED EVENT |
GAM-718 fixed event_v2 | GAM-718 fixed event_v2 | |
BOOK5 ; BOOK 6 (Book 3) | |||
STO22-STV85 ; STO28-STV109 (story 2) | GAM-1077 CHO-3342 speaks of a trap door, but the illustration shows a door GAM-1078 CHO-3344 GAM-1079 CHO-3347 GAM-1389 CHO-4314 GAM-1390 CHO-4316 GAM-1391 CHO-4319 |
GAM-18932--e29_v2 | GAM-18932--e29_v2 |
GAM-1081 CHO-3355 speaks of Ida and the illustration shows Simo GAM-1393 CHO-4327 |
book3-story2-version1-new-C8-c_e15_w2_v2 | book3-story2-version1-new-C8-c_e15_w2_v2 | |
GAM-1082 CHO-3357 speaks about Simo but the illustration shows the big man GAM-1394 CHO-4329 |
book3-story2-version1-new-C9-c_e70_v2 | book3-story2-version1-new-C9-c_e70_v2 | |
GAM-1082 CHO-3359 speaks of Ida and the illustration shows Simo GAM-1394 CHO-4331 |
GAM-18625--e15_w3_v2 | GAM-18625--e15_w3_v2 | |
GAM-1086 FIXED EVENT illustration suggests the answer "Those arriving in the waves?" GAM-1398 FIXED EVENT |
GAM-19170--q47_v2 | GAM-19170--q47_v2 | |
STO25-STV97 ; STO31-STV121 (story 5) | GAM-1235 CHO-3833 the picture does not match the caption “Anna began to beat the box” GAM-1547 CHO-4805 |
book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e67_w3_v2 | book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e67_w3_v2 |
GAM-1245 CHO-3862 speaks about Ida but the illustration shows Effy GAM-1557 CHO-4834 |
book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e59_v2 | book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e59_v2 | |
GAM-1245 CHO-3863 speaks about Ida but the illustration shows Effy GAM-1557 CHO 4835 |
book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e56_v2 | book3-story5-version1-new-C75--c_e56_v2 | |
STO26-STV101 ; STO32-STV125 (story 6) | GAM-1296 CHO-4022 speaks about Ida but the illustration shows Aidan | book3-story6-version1-new-C53--c_e53_w3_v2 | book3-story6-version1-new-C53--c_e53_w3_v2 |
GAM-1602 CHO-4975 the picture does not match the caption, it speaks about Ernesta but shows Effy GAM-1603 CHO-4976 |
GAM-290983--e48_w3_v2 | GAM-290983--e48_w3_v2 | |
BOOK 7 ; BOOK 8 (Book 4) | |||
STO33-STV129 (story 1) | GAM-1649 CHO-5121 the picture does not match the caption, it is written that Ben speaks, however the illustration shows that Sophie is talking | GAM-31211--e20_w3_v2 | GAM-31211--e20_w3_v2 |
GAM-1653 CHO-5136 the picture does not match the caption “Mum and Tina went for a cup of coffee” | GAM-31716-e37_v2 | GAM-31716-e37_v2 | |
STO35-STV137 (story 3) | GAM 1751 CHO-5437 The illustration shows the dog Liz, but the caption speaks of Sue “Sue waged her tail happily” ( “Susanna wagging happy”) | e38_w2_v2 | e38_w2_v2 |
GAM-1749 CHO-5432 the picture does not match the caption “Sue and Tina made a huge pile of rubbish” | e28_w3_v2 | e28_w3_v2 | |
GAM-1805 CHO-5603 the pictures do not match the captions “The village people gathered the mice at the shop” | e29_w1_v2 | e29_w1_v2 | |
GAM-1805 CHO-5604 the pictures do not match the captions “Mary and Luke hoped to bring the animals home” | e48_w2_v2 | e48_w2_v2 | |
STO37-STV145 (story 5) | GAM-1858 CHO-5771 the caption speaks of Sue the dog, but the illustration shows Sophie, the little girl, illustration must be corrected | 81_w1_v2 | 81_w1_v2 |
STO39-STV153 (story 7) | GAM-1956 CHO-6072 the caption speaks of grandmother, but the illustration shows the grandfather | 103_w3_v2 | 103_w3_v2 |
GAM-1959 CHO-6079 the picture does not match the caption “Mum realized that all was well with her family” | e62_v2 | e62_v2 | |
GAM-1963; CHO-6094 the picture does not match the caption “The cold wind did not blow” | c_e1_w3_v2 | c_e1_w3_v2 | |
GAM-1964 CHO-6097 the caption speaks of the uncle, but the illustration shows the aunt “Uncle Joe smiled at Mum with his new false teeth” | c_e60_w3_v2 | c_e60_w3_v2 | |
BOOK9 (book 5) | |||
STO51-STV201 (story 1) | GAM-2567 CHO-7955 the picture does not match the caption “The man started running” | e1374_w3_v2 | e1374_w3_v2 |
GAM-2571 CHO-7968 the picture does not match the caption “Fred came out of the café” | e1374_v2 | e1374_v2 | |
STO52-STV205 (story 2) | GAM-2624 the picture of FIXED EVENT does not match the caption “Fred calmed down” | e1886_w1_v2 | e1886_w1_v2 |
STO56-STV221 (story 6) | GAM-2825 CHO-8742 both the caption that the illustration are wrong, because the subject is not Loise but Clara | e200_v2 | e200_v2 |
GAM 2826 FIXED EVENT the illustration is missing Clara | e636_v2 | e636_v2 | |
GAM-2833 CHO-8768 the caption speaks of Bonny, but the illustration shows Louise | 2097_w3_v2 | 2097_w3_v2 |